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My first Fan fiction!!!

Your POV

I woke up in the morning feeling as fresh as orange juice; I tugged at the curtains and stood in the warming sun. My grandma had died a month ago, so I was all alone. For the legal documents and so on, I have to go to Korea. My letter of acceptance from SM high came in the mail a week ago, God I was excited. I didn’t apply to SM high, but they repeatedly called and sent me letters so I might as well go. My bags were all packed and ready to go, I showered and got dressed leaving my apartment. I would miss my friends Caroline, Marchelini and Rachel, they’ve helped me through a lot but I have to go. But now I was starting a new life, starting my dream of becoming a singer! I took a taxi to the airport, as I went towards the check in area I looked behind me and remembered the day......

No one's POV

Flash Back

“please don't leave me” the 6 year old girl yelped as she gripped the older boys sleeve, her face was wet with tears and her nose was running so much it look like tears.

“I'm sorry, I have to go,” Said the boy, he was tall lanky with Dark brown hair, he Knelt down to her level and hugged her “ I will come back for you I promise, I won’t be in Korea for long” , he pulled away and boarded his flight. The girl fell and started sobbing “OPPA! OOOPPPPAAAA!!” she screamed with all her might and her grandmother quickly dragged her away thoroughly embarrassed.

Onew's POV

I was 3 days away from my first day at Korea's top notch school, I looked at the sky and sighed.

“HYUUUNNGG!!!!” said someone right by my ear; it was Teamin my best friend. He was a small feminine boy, with short dark brown hair, a slim figure and long delicate hands. His smiled from ear to ear he was “as cute as a button” apparently, he was extremely popular with girls at school even guys sometimes. “YES TEAMINNIE!!??” I shouted playfully while ruffling his hair, he hated having his hair untidy. He gave me a glare “aren’t you the slightest nervous?? “he said in a slow paced tone which he rarely used. “no. why would I be? It’s just another school?? what is our little Teaminnie getting scared?? its ok you've got hyung!! “I said brightly, I had done a good job in comforting him his ear to ear smile was back “Hyung you’re such a …. PABO!!” he said playfully, I smiled “you’ve got three seconds, 1, 2...3!!” Teamin was already sprinting, but I was a faster runner and caught up easily. We walked home together. It reminded me of her, the times we had together, I always wonder what she’s doing now...

Your POV

I was on the plane and already above Korea I looked out the window in awe, my dream of going to Korea became real. “we will now be landing at Seoul airport, “announced the Pilate, I grinned to myself and couldn't stop. People at Seoul airport gave me funny looks but it was alright I was in Korea. ME!! I suddenly realized I should be look for my escort. I scanned the large group of people with signs, right at the back I saw a boy my age around about 18 holding a sign with my name on it. I pushed my luggage towards him and greeted him “Anyonghaseyo, Tammy imnida” I said with a huge grin on my face. He chuckled and said “I speak English, its ok.” I blushed and said in a softer voice “ooh, sorry”. He smiled again, my heart started to flutter he was very good looking and have a warm smile and voice, he cleared his throat and said “My name I Kim kibum by the way but you can call me key for short” I realized I was blushing a lot! I looked away and asked “should we go now?”

Keys POV

I was in my dorm when I got a call from the principle “key, could you go pick up a new overseas student? Her name is Tammy once she’s at the school, bring her to my office.” I moaned and said “ok, I will but this is the last time.” I was very annoyed I shut the phone and set off towards the airport. The principle already had a sigh made for me to hold up. At the airport I didn't have to wait long, this slim cute girl with sparkling eyes and short dark brown hair came towards me, “ Anyonghaseyo, Tammy imnida” she said in a bright voice, her smile was radiant, so was she everything about her was she  looked beautiful close up. I laughed at her cuteness, “I speak English, its ok.” I said trying to play, she blushed and said “ooh sorry” she exclaimed in a quieter voice. She was giving me a peculiar stare, my stomach was filled with butterflies, I forgot to introduce myself I'm such a pabo sometimes, I cleared my throat and said as cheerfully as I could “My name I Kim kibum by the way but you can call me key for short”, she turned around her face was bright pink, “should we go now?” she said while biting her delicate pink lips. I studied her face which looked like it was sculptured the gods, she wasn't the normal beauties you saw every day, she was something else. I took th luggage trolley from her and said “this way”. When we were in the car I sprouted 20 questions on her “what’s your favorite colour?” she replied in a self conscious voice “Sapphire blue”, Sapphire Blue?? wasn't that Super Junior sunbeanim's colour??  “are you a super junior fan?” I asked, “ How did you know?” she said obviously amazed at my guess, she looked like a puppy who's been shown its favorite toy but the owner hide it .I laughed and   just when I thought it would stop I would looked her confused face and it would started again. We continued with 20 Questions, she became more and more relaxed around me it made me sigh every time I looked at her. I never thought I could feel this way about a person I just met.

Your POV

when we got to the school I was hyperventilating, “ it’s ok”  said key “you've got me with you” his  bullet like smile came after that, it knocks me down every time. I took a deep breath and said “Fighting”. Next to me key was starting his laughing hysterias again, I playfully punched him “stop it! It’s not funny” I whined. He looked at me and said “gosh, I don't think vie met anyone as genuinely cute as you before” I blushed and started towards the large building dragging my suitcases along. The school was big, when I say big I mean HUUGGEE!!!there weren't many people here, key explained to me that it was break and the new term would start in 2 days. We walked down a hall and towards a room with a sigh on the door stating it was the principal’s office, we walked in and there was a secretary. Key flashed her killer smile and said smoothing “hey” she blushed and rummaged through the papers scattered on her desk she found an envelope decorated with swirl and a name printed in neat and writing on the front. “here you go key, Mr.kim told me to give this to you when you came with the new student” I smiled and bowed when she glanced at me, she gave a dissatisfied look and turn back  at key with ooglly eyes. “well, we have to go get Tammy settled into her dorm,” exclaimed key, he walked out of the office, I scurried behind him tripping over my feet but thankfully he caught me “are you ok” he inquired with his features full of worry. “I'm ok, thank you,” I said, embarrassed at my clumsiness. His face was itches away from mine, he helped me up and continued walking down the hall I grabbed my luggage and scurried after. We walked through a lot of corridors and eventually came to a white door with a golden handle, key pulled out a card thing from the envelope he swiped it in the panel above the door handle the door opened automatically. I stood there in awe, key looked at me and smile he held the door open and said “welcome home” as I walked through he winked at me which made me blush. The room was all white the kitchen was impeccably clean there were three bedrooms and two bathrooms, key opened one of the bed room doors and said “no one else lives here, this bedroom has an on suite bathroom you can take shower if you want. I'll wait for you in the living room”, I shuffled into the room dragging my luggage along. Key smiled and went to the living room I closed the door and sighed a sigh of excitement; I let out a suppressed squeal of joy. I took out an over sized t-shirt and some shorts out of my luggage and went to shower the warm water relaxed my stiff joints from th flight. After I dried my hair and got dressed I walked to the living room to find key asleep on the couch. He looked so innocent and cuddly when he was sleeping; I sat across from his face, hugging my legs and resting my face on my knees and started to stare at him unconsciously. His eyes flashed open and looked at me with a harsh stare. “I-I-ii-I'm sorry I-I uuuh I was just waiting for you to wake up, and now you are so...” I made the whole thing up it was the most unbelievable story. He sat up and yawned he patted the couch indication me to sit next to him I cautiously got up not wanting to trip or fall again. I sat next to him and he looked nervous for a second, what was he thinking about. He looked over at me with a strange shine in his eyes, he leaned in closer to me, I realized I was backing away and was at the end of the couch.  He was inches away, he whispered “Rule no1 never let guys into your room unless it’s me” he said with a wink, he sat back “rule no2 no vandalizing” he smirked at the though. “ok, so anything else I need to know??if not could you please leave!” I snapped back still angry about what happened. He smiled and said “do want me to kiss you??” he laughed at my shocked face, I couldn't take it anymore so I went to the fridge to get something to cool down with. God the nerve of that boy, I thought.

Keys POV

She was so cute when she was angry, for some reason I wanted to annoy her more. I walked towards the kitchen and gave her a back hug and said “yebo what’s for dinner?”, she turned around with anger steaming of her. She slapped me across my face and stormed off to her room. Maybe I went too far I thought, I have always joked around with girls like that but this was the first time I got slapped by someone. I felt a strange tightening in my chest, I wanted to see her even though I only took my eyes off her for a few minutes. I walked towards her room door and knocked “I'm sorry, I went too far let me make it up to you??” I said I a soft comforting voice I never even knew I had. She opened the door and   whispered “ how?” I couldn't help smiling I felt a huge sigh of relief, thank god she wasn't insanely mad at me. “lets go out to dinner” I suggested. She smiled “ok, I’ll just go and change.”, she got dressed  she walked out of her room looking amazing even though she was only wearing jeans and a t-shirt she looked like a goddess, I coughed “ we should go now” she smiled and nodded. We went to the night festival down in the city center, she was amazed at all the lights” wooooooow!” she exclaimed in awe. I laughed, “is this your first time going to a festival?”

she shook her head “ no, but this is my first time in Korea its amazing” silent tears started to fall across her face. I was stumped I didn't know what to do I reached out my hand but quickly pulled back. Why was I so worried about my actions around her?

Your POV

The lights made me wonder if her was here was Onew oppa here seeing this? Did he remember me?  Does he miss me as much as I  miss him? I realized key was watching me. His stare was very intense it looked as if he was trying to solve a math’s problem. I wiped my tears away and sighed “so what should we do now??” I said trying to be cheerful, he smiled “ whatever you want 'yebo'”, I giggled at his playfulness we walked down through the market together. He scooped up my hand and pulled me along. Why was my heart beating so fast?

Onew's POV      

“ Yah!Lee Teamin!Give my bag back!” I shouted getting angry

Teamin stuck out his tongue and replied “not until you say you’re going to the festival with me!”

“Aish! Teamin! Your such a kid sometimes! OK ill go! Who else is going? please tell me you didn't invite Minho??” Teamin fidgeted and giggled, Gosh he and Minho were such good friends and always left me out. “I'm sorry hyung! I also invited Jonghyun and key so it'll be ok!!” Teamin put on his I'm-so-innocent voice on, he knew it always got me. “ ok when are we going?” he smiled and said “now” after throwing my bag towards me. I sighed and changed, so did Teamin. He lives with me its small but it served as a good home for the past few years. We were going to move into the dorm at SM high so was Jonghyun, he was also one of our best friends along with Key and Minho. We all met in junior high. “ok I'm ready let's go,” exclaimed Teamin who was excited, he always got excited easily like Tammy. I brushed the thoughts away, we arrived and I saw Jonghyun and Minho waiting outside Teamin ran towards them and gave them a huge bear hug. The laughed and said “ what are you? 6 years old?” I laughed and walked up, “long time no see,” I said as we did our friendship handshake. “ yeah where have you been said a voice from the left, I could recognize that voice anywhere It was key! There was someone he was pulling along, she looked familiar her short dark brown hair and bright eyes. “This is Tammy, she going to SM high as well she just came to Korea today, from New Zealand, I had to escort her to the dorms.” I smiled at Tammy as she stood there nervously. “ right where should we go now?” said Onew with his fake smile planted on his face again, he never smiled like that unless there was a camera or he was trying to cover up his thoughts?

Your POV

I stood next to key in front of all those handsome Korean boys, “ Right where should we go now?” said the familiar looking boy, his smile was adorable. I felt as if I had seen it before. The feminine boy ran next to me and linked my arm with his and said “this noona's mine!” hi hung’s laughed as he stuck out his tongue. “hey, I'm Teamin ;)” he whispered, I laughed and said “ I'm Tammy just like Key said,”. The tall lanky boy with black shoulder length hair was next Teamin “ My name Is Minho” he exclaimed, thank god they spoke a little bit of English. Teamin was still gripping on to my arm, he was so cute like a little brother when you saw him you just want to cuddle him. “ See the boy with orange hair that’s Onew and the Boy with the blond hair is Jonghyun,” Teamin whispered to me, I looked at him and smiled. Onew? Could that be him? It couldn't be, could it? Was it going to be this easy to find him? I shook my head to clear my thoughts. Teamin looked at me with puppy dog eyes and said “what’s wrong?” I looked at him, ruffled his hair and said “nothing”, “Yah.” he said playfully, reaching to ruffle my hair. I ducked and ruffled his hair again, he stuck out his tongue at me and said “ I don't want to play anymore” I laughed at his cute childishness. So did the rest of the boys, I felt strangely comfortable around them. We walked around the festival, I enjoyed being with Teamin he was so cute and was very talkative. I could understand Korean but had difficulties replying in Korean, Key translated for me. For some reason there was always a crowd following us, taking photos (it was mostly girls). They are all handsome but isn't that an invasion of privacy, they walked ahead quietly and quickly.  Key grabbed my hand and whispered “run!”, I was confused and stood still but key pulled me along. The rest of the boys were running as well. WTF was going on here? I looked back and saw a group of girls chasing us. Key obviously got frustrated at my slowness. He scooped me up and ran towards a black van, the rest of the boys were already there when key shoved me into the van. “ what the hell is going on?” I asked key, as he closed the door with  a sigh. “doesn't she recognize us?” Minho asked, with an astonished expression on his face. “ok guys 1. 2 . ..3” shouted the boy named Onew. They shouted in union “ Anyonghaseyo we are shining Shinee” they were smiling brightly at me expecting me to understand I just sat there and obviously disappointed them. I had no idea what they were on about. My phone rang, loudly playing 'u-by super junior', I looked at the caller ID. O my Gosh it was Rachel!! she is my bestie back in NZ  along with another girl named Caroline it was quite  a difficult decision I had to make coming to Korea. Leaving my whole life and all. “ RAHCEL!!” I shouted into the phone, “ Tammy! Why didn't you all us you said you would as soon as you arrived in Korea??! Anyway are you ok? Did you get to school safe??Pleases don't tell me the letter was a prank!?”I laughed at her worrying, she had always been this way but it became worst after my grandmother died. “I'm perfectly fine, I miss you guys a lot! I will call you later and I’ll tell you everything that’s happened ok?? or better yet we can Skype! They gave me my own laptop!! Isn't that cool?!! I'll have to take you on a web cam tour through the dorm ok?? Love you! Tell carol I love her and miss her as well!” I said frantically knowing if I stayed on the phone any longer I would be crying so hard I would be able to see(thank god I was sitting in the back with only key!).

“ ok ill talk to you later! Don't get too excited by being in Korea and go off with some random guy ok?” I laughed “ why would I do that? ok bye!! I promise ill control myself!!” I quickly closed the phone feeling the tears forming. I was not going to cry in front of all these guys!.I turned and looked at key he was staring at me. Why? Was there something on my face?? “is there something on my face?” I asked him. He leaned towards me and...........

keys POV

 Why does Teamin always get on better with girls than anyone else in the group? It was so unfair she was obviously happier with him than me! How can that be? I'm perfect! She looked at me now and then asking me to translate words for her or to reply for her, but that was IT!! The others noticed me staring at her and were giving me the We-know-you-like-her look. I Sighed, they were going to use this moment against me so many times, and I just knew it. The fans were quickly surrounding us, Minho gave me a glance, and I knew what that meant I've seen it too many times. It meant run, the managers up ahead. I grabbed Tammy's hand (which I didn't mind doing at all) and whispered to her “run”. I pulled her along but knew we weren't fast enough. I would have to carry her, I smiled at the thought. Well, I guess it was mandatory stopped turned around and scooped her up into my arms. I was smiling the whole way towards the van, I looked down at her she was closing her and looked angry! She was so beautiful, i wish that I could hold her forever. What the hell was I thinking?! We got the van and I pushed her inside, she scurried towards the back of the car and I quickly followed. She looked at me and said  “what the hell is going on?”, she didn't recognize us? Minho beat me “doesn't she recognize us?”.  Onew looked at us and said “ok guys 1. 2 . ..3” WE smiled and said our team greeting together “Anyonghaseyo we are shining Shinee”, I smiled hoping she would understand but she just looked at us as if we just picked our noses. Her phone rang, it ring tone was very familiar, hmm I know that song from somewhere..... OMG!! its Super Juniors song! She knows them but not us? What is this? We're not as popular as them but still, we were from the same company. She was talking in  English to her friend over the phone her eyes began to water a she rushed through the conversation. She hung up the phone and looked my way. She noticed I was staring at her but I didn't care, “is there something on my face?” she said innocently. I  leaned towards her and brushed the tear streaming down her face away. I've seen and even made plenty of girls cry but I didn't care, but why do I care if she's crying. I pulled away and looked out the window. What was I doing?

Onew's POV

she was so familiar I defiantly knew her from somewhere, I pulled out a mirror to look at her from the front. I saw key leaning In and wiping her tear away, she sat there frozen and unable to speak. She looked straight at the mirror with her eyes as big as a bush baby's. I knew that look from somewhere, It was her! It was the Tammy! I Knew she looked familiar! AHA!! We arrived at the school dorm. The manger in the front of the car looked at us and said “Don't go to places like that anymore your Idol's now! I've picked up all of your stuff up from your houses. You are moving into the dorms NOW! Ill text Onew your schedule, be ready by 7:00!”.We all nodded, sometimes it was difficult being the leader if we had to be ready by 7:00 I would have to wake all the members up at 6:00.Which meant I would have to be ready AT 6:00. Enough complaining, I should go talk to Tammy. It’s been years hasn't it? I wonder how her mother is? And how her grandmother is?! I've got too many questions that have been left unanswered. We got out of the van and grabbed our luggage from the back, Jonghyun,  Minho  and key already lived her so they didn't have anything to carry. “I'm going to walk Tammy to her dorm” Key announced,  I opened my mouth to protest but then remembered what key did in the car. He must really like her so ill leave them alone. Although what is Tammy doing in Korea? In SM high?? like I said too many unanswered Questions, although is that what life is made up of?


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